Wednesday 21 March 2012

Hayden's entry for the five sentence challenge

One day ther was tow little kids going crabing. They did not find no crabs but then the tow little kids saw sumthing it gigld and gigld. One of the kids stept on sumthing. He hated to go to hospertol. Soon the dockter found out what it was it was a crab a big, red and feroshus crab.

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  1. Harry Templeman23 March 2012 at 09:55

    Hi Hayden I like your five sentence espicially this bit hopspertol. soon the dockter found it was it was a crab.


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  2. Tasha Cowdy, Yokohama International School28 March 2012 at 22:41

    Hi Hayden. I like the bit about the ferocious crab! I imagine the crab being very cross because he had been stood on, and that making him ferocious! KC students are on holiday right now, but I will share your story with them when they return.

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  3. Mrs Skinner2 April 2012 at 14:14

    Goodness Hayden - what a super set of sentences! I love that you decided to concentrate on one part of the picture. I shall take care when I go into the water next time in case there is a crab!Good to see you on the 5SC!

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