One day two pritty girls were in there house but suddenly they found a ear-ring on the flor and acadently chucked it out the glass window. So the two girls had to go fishing to find the ear-ring of cors the pet to. So they all got there nets out two for the girls and one for the pet. So they fished and found the ear-ring. The end.
Hi poppy I like the word pritty girls and
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Hi Poppy! I will read this to my students when they return from holiday in April. I wonder if they will know what "chucked" means? Hmmm! Your story will give them an opportunity to learn a new word!
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ReplyDeleteYou have certainly used your imagination with these sentences. What a super story you have written. Thank you for joining the 5SC!
Hello poppy I love your work. it is amasing and I think you have put alot of effort in your work.
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Hi poppy i like you work the best on ever and you put a lot a effort
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